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LeeJ
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0 posted 2005-07-27 07:35 AM


yes, indeed, it fires deep within the soul
some sort of extravagance
vindicating innocence
a heretic mystery, producing
grand effects…
which minds of the world cry for
under pressures, with great proof of weakness…

an affair with pleasant ways
presumptuous, like an attempt
to discover how it really could be?

lord ohhhhh lord….
far too cavernous a feeling!
obnoxious sentiment, oozing purpose
this favorable thing
this debate of freedom
giving not one explanation
sand-blasting me, unprejudiced!

finding me extremely fine spun
finding myself in expectation!
a soul’s course of conversation
speaking sin of omission
this proposition prepared to admire
what is it, why can’t I fight it?
to able mankind even tempered
this commission inspires…

joining three lines, now beginning
ohhhh surely I can’t see them
but by God, they’re there….

actually an ancient perceptive point
crowded with censorship, this poor
poor higher orthodoxy of illustration
under apprehension, puzzling me &
astonished by its declaration while
i turn around for a very long stare
yes, a very long long stare

knowing i need no proof
it is, the very first passage of surrender
contrary to whispers beyond all comparison

frankly, it owns my smiles,
exposing uniform validity
a maneuver, i assure you, quit zealous
and bemused
confessing some doctrine of inward testament
oh this abusing evil
this matter of inference
drawing me weak without regret
delightful knowledge of matrix
humility
embracing some conceived power
philosopher boasting divine willingness
I yield to its authority
This apostle of greatness…

with fatal blows and
preposterous mind remarks
not wanting to let go
Oh
i am delighted!!
have i…
have i told you
just how
much
i care for you?



© Copyright 2005 Lee J. - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2005-07-27 07:41 AM


LeeJ,
Yes but you can say it again. LOL
Good morning sweety.

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2005-07-27 08:36 AM


Now that would be "An Affair To Remember"!

The spill from your quill is always good to the last drop! lol

Hugs with love,
Linda

Sunshine
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3 posted 2005-07-27 08:37 AM


Marking this - will be back tonight...


MGROVES
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4 posted 2005-07-27 08:41 AM


awesome write as always~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Gentle Spirit
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5 posted 2005-07-27 08:43 AM


finding me extremely fine spun
finding myself in expectation!
a soul’s course of conversation
speaking sin of omission
this proposition prepared to admire
what is it, why can’t I fight it?
to able mankind even tempered
this commission inspires…
Indeed lady, understanding this.  

froggy
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6 posted 2005-07-27 03:59 PM


I like this one.

:-)

<^^> Today the pond....Tomorrow the world

Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2005-07-27 04:06 PM


Lee~

'frankly, it owns my smiles'

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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suthern
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8 posted 2005-07-27 04:44 PM


I knew I was going to love this one when I read the title... and I was right. *S*
Martie
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9 posted 2005-07-27 06:16 PM


LeeJ

I have had an afair with DT also, and I still haven't gotten over it!  I loved this!  

miscellanea
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10 posted 2005-07-27 06:32 PM


Lee,

   So good to read you again!  You just keep getting better and better!  Thoroughly enjoyed this.

        miscellanea

jwesley
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11 posted 2005-07-27 07:01 PM


Always amazed at the things shaken loose from that pretty head of yours my friend.

j.

ice
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12 posted 2005-07-27 09:41 PM


"i turn around for a very long stare
yes, a very long long stare"

About that time I am usually poked in the ribs to bring me back to reality..

ahh!, how sweet, delightful thoughts..

enjoyed
-----------ice/ford
   ><>

JamesMichael
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13 posted 2005-07-28 12:05 PM


Nice...James
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