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Is there Something on Your Mind?
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Is there Something on Your Mind? |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
It’s nothing really It’s just sometimes When I walk away from the Earth’s core I find myself searching For a new piece of sunshine Inside of me Not much It’s just sometimes Much of what I deem perfection Ends up disappointing me in some way Just because it can No—nothing here It’s just sometimes Here is the last place I want to be Seeing as being here Just puts me in a class of Me Myself and… I need some help sometimes Oh—I’ve got nothing to say To say the least At least I can Breathe on my own Without needing the Salt of your mouth’s Oxygen machine Although the sugar from The tears I sweat Sometimes Drive me insane Does it bother you when I ask you Why you’d rather see the moon Than let the sun cascade upon your eyes? Does it bother you when I tell you That I’d rather have you deny me Then accept the mediocrity of Some six-year old beauty queen? It’s just sometimes You make me mad as hell! It’s just sometimes You don’t see the mess you’ve left me to ponder over It’s just sometimes I wish I’d never ever seen your perfect smile It’s just sometimes You’re too damn good to be true It’s just sometimes Sometimes Sometimes Sometimes I need you and You’d rather parade around this charade of Middle American happiness It’s just sometimes Sometimes Sometimes Sometimes You send me into a place of sadness That I cannot follow It’s just sometimes I forget that I’ve gotten over you It’s just that… It’s just that… Sometimes… Sometimes… It’s just that sometimes… It’s just that sometimes… It’s just sometimes It’s not fair! You can forget about me And probably have But I still have to live with your Lips And your smile And your eyes And your light Tattooed to the middle of my brain And your kiss And your touch And your sex All could have been good If it were to exist within me But it doesn’t And I have to live with that And I have to move on And I have to remember that you hurt me Not me hurting you All I did was allow you to walk away It’s just sometimes… No…no… Forget it… I don’t have anything to say… Just thinking out loud It’s just… It’s just that… It’s just that sometimes… Just… Never mind… Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh—I’ve got nothing to say ~*~ Wanna bet?  I really liked this ramble! Why? Because I know it. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
hugging a knowing feeling... enjoyed this... I think I have rambled this way before  M |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
Thank you ever so much...sorry that I rambled...but sometimes it's the best therapy...and for some reason I was listening to a song...it's called "The Stupid Things" by this artist named Thicke...anyway I was listening to this and all the feelings I thought I had let go came to fruition...just needed to ramble and thought there was no better place to do it than Passions! Again...thank you for your kind words! Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big angel hugs) Awwwwwww, I understand these emotions that your heart contemplates here, dearest friend! (sigh) I absolutely agree that rambling is good therapy; it helps to understand yourself and reflect on things often when facing situations with others, for understanding yourself and where you're coming from makes greater sense of where you want to go and how you want to breathe! (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, I know with all my heart you will find all your deserving heart desires, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Haven't been around here for a long time, but every once in a while I pop in, and do a little reading, though I don't usually reply. This one really struck me. I've had this ramble, I understand it, and I really, really like the way you wrote it. You can never win or lose |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
Oh...Sweet Angel O' Mine...thank you for your kind words. As always you put the light back in my heart when I all seem to feel is darkness. Love ya! Tracey...I'm glad that I appealed to you so much. I'm glad that people feel a connection with this ramble...first love is tough! Again thank you all!! Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
It's just sometimes the words are bad and they are really bad It's just sometimes, someone else is waiting and the exit is easy It's just soemtimes, someone has to take blame and it doesn't matter who It's just sometimes you are so close that you fight each other for breath It's just sometimes You wonder the next morning Why one of you is still alive after the words you spoke to each other It is just sometimes You still want to go on Together |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
awesome~ My spirit will rise |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this was expression at it finest...sometimes a body has got to ramble, expression is important for the soul, ventilation I suspect...hehe, This isn't silly in the least...this was personal raw emotion written very well |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"It’s just sometimes I forget that I’ve gotten over you" ~ That line really popped out at me! Actually, the whole ding dang ramble from a restless heart reached out and grabbed my attention! This sort of ramble I could have verbalized many times over ~ in my previous lifetime! All I can say is that now, I do remember that I have gotten over him! lol Great spill!!!  EA |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
James...thank you for your comment. Bodger...thank you for taking my words a step further and helping me move on once again. Hopefully you're here if I ever have to escape myself again. MGroves...thank you for your kind comment. LeeJ...thank you so much for your understanding...it means a lot more to me than I can express! Earth Angel...I'm happy that my words connected to you. That means a lot. Thank you all for your kind words and support of a silly little girl with a broken heart! Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
always let your voice be heard! In your light I learn how to love |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my...do I know where you're coming from here! Excellent write..absolutely excellent! Hugs~Nancy Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Camiele~ I greatly enjoyed reading these feelings~ Been there ... had 'em ... as most of us have at one time or another in our lives~ Great ink-spill, poetess~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Well done. And I'm glad you have something to say. And not just sometimes. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
ahhh....boy do I know the feel of this and of sometimes... I loved your write, well done. |
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The One & Only Member
since 2005-01-26
Posts 58Kansas USA |
I really like this post, It took me back to a sometimes place I only go when I think that no one is looking but sometimes they are!!!! |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
Aww...thank you so very much for your replies!! You all have truly touched me with your kind words! Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
"It's just sometimes. . ." Yep, the kissin' cousin of "ya know". . . can have so-o many additives that you drive yourself crazy thinking about them. But in the end none of them say anything like plain old, "It's just sometimes" . . . you know? Wonderful write... j. |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
jwesley...I do know...sometimes the only words are the ones that are simplest in nature. Thank you for your comment! Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Reading again....enjoyed...the way I handle someone walking away is to imagine how gracious I would want them to be if I decided to walk away...James |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Unique, enjoyed. Yes, hum, very unique, enjoyed. Oops, here I go again. Great piece. SG |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
WOW!!! Absolutely stunning...your words are very powerful touching the soul of this reader...**big hugs** |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
Thank you everyone...so much...your replies have really touched me! It's great to know that one's feelings are appreciated in writing! Thank you again! Yv~Seeing eternal Sunshine |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Enjoyed this because as you have just learned, so many of us understand the need to think out loud and sometimes even better to get it down on a page and try to understand ourselves... best to you, martyjo |
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