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Of Eventide...
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Of Eventide... |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Silently falls eventide, across wide Kansas plain, From Hutchinson to Elkhart, 'cross ranch and farmer's lane, Gone the bustle of the day, as heaven ope's her eyes, With Venus leading forth her flock, to light up welkin skies, Reflections on land's scape below, with come of eve's unfold, Revealing for all earth to view, crown jewels of night's behold, I stand below in silent awe, gaze up to firmament, A man alone on a Kansas plain, beneath the night resplendent. Hear you not of evening's call, sound forth on winds so light, They touch with softness of a kiss, sweet whispers of the night. |
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BeWitched Junior Member
since 2005-07-06
Posts 31 |
like how this made me feel, nice writing  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah, Sir... you've traveled, I am sure... by plane and across from NY to CA... and you have seen the quilt bewitched by various lights below... but these lands will never match the ultimate of a night's sky at Eventide.... Thank you. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
perhaps not on Kansas plains but have felt the splendor of such words ... once or twice Great write! CT |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
A man alone on a Kansas plain, beneath the night resplendent. Hear you not of evening's call, sound forth on winds so light, They touch with softness of a kiss, sweet whispers of the night. this sounds and feels like a peaceful whisper within...a glory in it's own kind, and you sir, are blessed beyond compare. Astounding verse |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful piece |
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