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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2005-07-04 12:22 PM

Subliminal

The heat that radiates the rose
Brought by scent
It glistens far into the afterglow
As dawn reveals herself
In thoughts that quicken pulse
Illuminate the dalliance of hope
And heart

To matter from a theme of dream
By making way of wild things
Found tame and vibrant
Giving dimension and range
In deeper connections let linger
As mist upon the eyes
So sweet

The hand remembers form and texture
Truly to be one
Yet this is what exceeds the rhyme
Completes design
A chord of fire to crescendo
Left as gift to Eden
From the soul to bloom
As love

Copyright Kkh 07/04/05

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2005-07-04 12:33 PM

"A chord of fire to crescendo"
~love that!~
thank you for another delightfully poetic read!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2005-07-04 06:45 AM

lovely, as usual

love the ending

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

3 posted 2005-07-04 10:20 AM

very, very nice TD -

Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

4 posted 2005-07-04 12:58 PM

Good words

Bodger

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

5 posted 2005-09-30 12:59 PM

"The hand remembers form and texture
Truly to be one
Yet this is what exceeds the rhyme
Completes design "

Kathleen, this is a wonderful poem....sorry, I missed it earlier. It needs a boot up.

....jo

Sharksbean
Member

since 2005-09-25

Posts 368
jax

6 posted 2005-09-30 09:40 AM

this was just incredibly beautiful im glad you shared this with us thank you

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-may the force be with you in poetry

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2005-09-30 11:23 AM

Kathleen~

'The hand remembers form and texture
Truly to be one
Yet this is what exceeds the rhyme
Completes design
A chord of fire to crescendo
Left as gift to Eden
From the soul to bloom
As love'

*sigh* ... this is another inked beauty from you~

I sure thank Jo~ for giving it a lift~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - noles1@totcon.com

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

8 posted 2005-09-30 11:32 AM

Yes, this is well worth another round!

Excellent write, dear TD!

Love,
Margherita

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2005-09-30 12:00 PM

Beautiful writing Kathleen..
Hugs~Nancy

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile.~

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