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0 posted 2005-07-21 12:09 PM


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It’s the distance
of a whisper
that separates

and in that distance
endless echoes
I love you.... I love you
fill
overflow
you feel me
there

just
a whisper
away


~SEA~


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1 posted 2005-07-21 12:21 PM


Oooh..this is nice. I like it..:-) Just a whisper away.

Such a nice, soft, romantic piece. Nice to have someone that shares that whisper with you.

Excellent....Mike :-)

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2 posted 2005-07-21 12:36 PM


a romantic write, indeed
well done!

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3 posted 2005-07-21 12:37 PM


Expressed with such loving feelings

Hope

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4 posted 2005-07-21 12:52 PM


you whisper well lady.....hope he hears it.. .. hugssss

In your light I learn how to love
In your beauty how to make poems
You dance inside my chest where
no one sees you and that sight becomes this art

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5 posted 2005-07-21 01:00 PM


Such a lovely whisper of a write Sue.
Beautiful..
Hugs~Nancy

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

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6 posted 2005-07-21 01:13 PM



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7 posted 2005-07-21 01:23 PM


very very nice....my oh my a picture is worth a thousand words, which makes your words almost spiritual and blessed...
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8 posted 2005-07-21 08:42 PM


I read this earlier and said-- oh yeah--I wish I had wrote this.

poetry in motion poetess susan...
succinct and sensational.....


and wow Jon is a hottie  LOL        


I'll bare the brunt of your long buried pain
I don't mind helping you out
But I want you to remember my name

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9 posted 2005-07-21 09:02 PM


Hmmmm

methinks the anniversary
was very pleasant!

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10 posted 2005-07-22 12:18 PM


thank you all very much for the great replies, and yes, he is and yes the anniversary was great!
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11 posted 2005-07-22 12:45 PM


SEA~

I saved you for 'dessert' ...
this is delicately decadent~

Glad you and Jon had such a nice Happy Anniversary~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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12 posted 2005-07-22 01:35 PM


thank you Marge!!
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