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Ringo

Member Elite

since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

0 posted 2006-01-05 12:54 PM

I sat by the window
Watching her walk
Into the lines of my past
As I fought the tears
Brought on by the memories
The touch of her hands
The warmth of her kiss
The taste of her skin
As we lay together
Making love under the stars
Until the night
Ever constant
Gave way until the morning sun
Causing me to awake
Look at the clock
Realizing once again
The dream of her
Is all that’s real

"...and as we drift along, I never fail to be astounded by the things we'll do for promises..."
Ronnie James Dio

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

1 posted 2006-01-05 01:00 AM

may all your dreams
come true

life-ultra
New Member

since 2006-01-04

Posts 4
Texas

2 posted 2006-01-05 02:12 AM

Ringo,
That is some pretty short and sweet stuff.
I was takin back a little in the 3rd and 4th line and the ending is great!!
Keep it up!

Joey

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

3 posted 2006-01-05 09:35 AM

This was different from you and its ok to keep the good things in your mind, you know better to let them guide you.

*smile*

I know this too.

It is going to be a much better year.

aujussy wolf

Senior Member

since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

4 posted 2006-01-07 08:51 PM

I sat by the window
Watching her walk
Into the lines of my past


`cool opener , and a deep ending to this fine work ringster

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2006-01-07 08:56 PM

Ringo~
This one had to flow from heart-ink~
And beautifully so~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - noles1@totcon.com

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2006-01-07 09:05 PM

Straight from your heart to these blue pages.
Well done m'friend.
Hugs~Nancy

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

Dominique-Simone
Senior Member

since 2005-11-12

Posts 643

7 posted 2006-01-07 10:33 PM

This poem seemed very familar to me. I know I have not read it but maybe something like it... When i figure it out I will let you know. Great job!

Angelheart
Senior Member

since 2005-09-08

Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

8 posted 2006-01-07 10:42 PM

very heart warming write, you did well with the flow, thanks for sharing this piece, keep up the awesome poetry.

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

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