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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Fantasia Temples of light between the trees Dancing leaves danced in the breeze Splashes of blue and aqua marine Brought a heavenly touch to the scene Passing shadow to shadows hide Searching the magic of this abide Viewing touching all I could see Making it all a part of me The end of a rainbows treasure A sensual state of pleasure To walk this forest and it’s seem Was the essence of my dream? I lulled within this timeless place A mental treasure caught in space The phantom of a spirits home And I was walking in its zone I never know the where or when But I will surely come again |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
To walk this forest and it’s seem Was the essence of my dream? I lulled within this timeless place A mental treasure caught in space The phantom of a spirits home And I was walking in its zone I never know the where or when But I will surely come again ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I know just the place...meet me at Castlewood...tell Randy to bring your hiking boots.  (i do so love when you write rhymes on the leaves)  *ww*    Thru the water...thru the rain |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Morning Sy! This was a beautiful start to the morning.  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Gooood morning, Sir T.! I see that you have shifted from the yin gears of your previous post into the yang of this present one! Yer fulla surprises! ~ but that is one of the reasons that I find your writing so intriguing! ~ The body of your literary works is akin to a glorious box of chocolate treats!  Angel hugs 'n kisses, EA |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
Temples of light between the trees Dancing leaves danced in the breeze Splashes of blue and aqua marine Brought a heavenly touch to the scene ~oh my this verse is a beauty your the best , so good at rhymes i can only watch and learn from your mastery of words ~may your new year be everything you have wished for ! ~James |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I have to agree with Earth Angel on this, Sy, as I indulge myself this morning! Happy 2006! jo |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Hi there Sy this is a beautiful start to 2006, wonderful read. ~hugs~ Tracie |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Happy New Year me sweet Sy-guy. ( I had to start the new year off right with some of your rhymes divine.) *ww* |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Seymour...Your poetry is always so smooth and easy to read. Thank you for sharing...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ Paul |
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