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OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
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0 posted 2005-12-21 02:36 PM


Out to Sea, a Yellow Bird
18 December 2005

Far out to sea, waves lapping at the boat
and land forgotten,
fishing, you spied
a little yellow bird, with a slender beak - not a sea bird,
exhausted on the water.

You stretched out your hand
to save it,
and,
in a breath-swept, miracle-moment, that will last all your days,
this little wild creature
hopped on to your upturned, St Francis hand
and you brought it on to the boat
and it hopped around
to say thank you
then disappeared,
- flown away,
you thought.

Hours later when the boat docked
and you and your two friends
were pulling the boat out of the water,
out flew
the little rested, thank you bird.

- Owl

© Copyright 2005 Diana van den Berg - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2005-12-21 03:06 PM



This one, as well...

charming!


Alwye
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2 posted 2005-12-21 06:19 PM


Beautiful and sweet!

~*Krista Lee Knutson*~

"Creating yourself is a spiritual act." ~ Susan Vreeland

Ericc
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3 posted 2005-12-21 07:13 PM


Wonderful write!

Eric

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
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4 posted 2005-12-22 09:54 AM


Thanks, Sunshine, Alwye and Eric.  This really happened to my son - and very recently - last Saturday!

- Owl

Klassy Lassy
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since 2005-06-28
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5 posted 2006-02-28 10:13 PM


a beloved aunt, now gone,  gave me a little yellow wooden bird ornament years ago as a Christmas memento. When I see that little bird, I'll remember this small miracle.

~ Karen ~

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
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Durban, South Africa
6 posted 2006-03-01 02:47 PM


Thank you, Karen.  That is a beautiful connection.

- Owl

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