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Blue Love
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Blue Love |
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DanniArtist Junior Member
since 2005-12-08
Posts 16 |
Blue Love Watch, believe what you see Catch, lost moments you share with me I’ll violate every rule you legislate I’ll toss constitutions, the ones I can’t relate Prisoners of love are sitting behind bars The whole world could be ours If only kissing baits weren’t so wet No one could have judged them and fish their regret I asked love trappers and they said I’m the trapee I guess wisdom no one can buy except god and thee So tell me secretly because free loose minutes I can’t achieve Terrific hologram tries to hug me, to kiss, realizing lonely eve I’ll acquire fatigue when the race is over I’ll try to find a key to our locked love endower Until then your unshod heart will buy getaway shoes Unleash your love dogs, they’ll run after me in every way I choose Commencing your countdown, numbers don’t represent me this time I can’t talk about love, I can only mime I shrink and I’m stuck in my shaft, then vaporize I blink and I’m writing a draft, then apologize You don’t accept my entreaties and gaze at the confession’s booth No absolutions because you aren’t saying the truth I can’t control you and I can’t control a wild horse I love you, but this is beyond my holy loving force |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I really enjoyed this write, especially the last stanza You don’t accept my entreaties and gaze at the confession’s booth No absolutions because you aren’t saying the truth I can’t control you and I can’t control a wild horse I love you, but this is beyond my holy loving force I understand this, all to well. Very well written. |
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DanniArtist Junior Member
since 2005-12-08
Posts 16 |
Gentle Spirit, I'm glad you enjoyed it !!! Thank you !!! Truly yours, OpenO |
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