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Open Poetry #36

Define the Poet

shades of paul
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since 2005-12-14

Posts 370
In Reality

0 posted 2005-12-16 10:20 AM

What do I do wrong ?
Should these lines be in song ?
Wrong place wrong time ?
To be caught up in rhyme ?
With more brain thoughts to flow,
Should my poems and I go ?
My conceptual poem vice,
must be to high a price ?
Going,going,

shades of paul,peace,love,and happiness

[This message has been edited by shades of paul (12-16-2005 11:42 AM).]

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2005-12-16 07:03 PM

lol, I enjoyed this quiz
welcome to the pips

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2005-12-16 09:42 PM

Ah, Paul...
you should have seen me
in 1999....

I questioned my every
word, and every post...

here, deep in my heart.

Enjoyed this introspection!

Sunshine

shades of paul
Member

since 2005-12-14

Posts 370
In Reality

3 posted 2005-12-16 10:38 PM

well ok,I,ll stay......thanks

shades of paul,peace,love,and happiness

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

4 posted 2005-12-16 10:42 PM

I ask those questions from time to time , but where would emotions go if I did not pen them into a rhyme

Hope

shades of paul
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since 2005-12-14

Posts 370
In Reality

5 posted 2005-12-16 10:51 PM

Dear Hope,they certainly should be documented in rhyme or the abstact, I promised myself my next poem will not rhyme, thanks for responding...paul

shades of paul,peace,love,and happiness

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2005-12-16 11:04 PM

You had certainly better not go.
Good write!! Good questions we all ask ourselves.
Hugs~Nancy

~Let peace begin with me...

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