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soul drifter
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since 2004-09-08
Posts 711
Colorado

0 posted 2005-12-16 01:31 AM


(this and my other latest, 'Red Furniture', will probably kill further commenting on my previous post, 'She's The Only One', but I can't help it; I'm on a roll right now.)

demons and songs

demons and songs
are the same thing to me
they weigh on me heavily
so my cheek scrapes the sidewalk
my heart sinking into my shoes
and i'm performing exorcisms
every night
dripping black ink blood
on journal pages

to understand this all,
i take a christ pose
tied to my guitar
between c minor
and g flat major
edgar allen poe on one shoulder
with eyes burning
john lennon on the other side
cheering me on

oh
i feel the coda comin'
ripping through my skin
the chorus banging around my head
like an angry elephant
bones and muscle
crack and ripple with
every moment i carry this demon
of a song
down the neck to d

demons and songs
angels and inspiration
whatever/whatever
a blue electrical conduit
of mad music
am i

but if the demonic songs
promise to make me better
in the eyes of beloved people,
then destroy my heart
and own my soul -
i'm yours

but this is not a song
'cause i'm bled white tonight
but i can already feel the tingles
of another one coming
a shark to tear its teeth
through me
just to get to its prey:
the blank open page

the blank empy gaze
demons and songs
leave when they're done
hell and/or heaven
leaving a gaping hole in my body
till the next demon comes 'round
till the next song flutters away
into your heart
i can only hope
else why the shivering death inside me
every time?

"The moon ain't romantic, it's intimidating as hell". -- Tom Waits, 'Bad Liver and a Broken Heart'

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Bodger
Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time
1 posted 2005-12-17 02:26 PM


Nothing is every knew

Or

New

People fill throngs that pay money that lead them to fill throngs that pay money et al.

Gullible in the name of religion - "I am only doing this, because I can't find someone else to blame, and I read it on page 'whatever'"

Writing on a website what you feel, if you feel you should do more, is where it stops.

You take talent, understand the world is not perfect, and then you still write

Take care

Dave

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