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No Excuse
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No Excuse |
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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
The moment I walked in I could feel that this was not another dead room It was alive a single heart beating and there you stood For once I could ignore The low frequency tension in the air I get the most claustrophobic feeling Looking in your endless eyes It’s where I want to live it’s who I want to be And if there’s a certain stutter in my speech, a detached step I hesitate to take It’s just me tripping over myself to heal your wounds so one of us can be complete The cobwebs are suddenly clear I’m left with no excuse There never was an excuse for me I am just so overcome by your simple honesty The Mongrel cat came home, Holding half a head proceeded to show it off to all his new found friends |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow cool write |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
It’s just me tripping over myself to heal your wounds so one of us can be complete connectivelty to dimensional background sounds elevates flexibilty, soft touch and true ears...enjoyed this a lot |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
Well done! When theres no excuse best to admit it. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Wonderful writing. I enjoyed reading it. Hugs, Ethel |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
The line Lee quoted was my favorite as well..  very much enjoyed."too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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