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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
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0 posted 2005-12-08 08:05 PM



Some say the color gray is sadness
Yet is it not the in between of stark
That you conjure and embark upon
Rich emotions that rasp away before

A culling of wound and debris
Softness as smoke in pale resonance
Light, vague in the tone of change
The curling whispers of immortality

Some say the color gray is drab
Yet is it but the base of neutral
A balancing of attitude endeared
Somehow stable from the pitch once feared

A name between the lines of infamy
Scene in defiance and charm
The artist’s eye of double exposure
Am I monotone in heartbeat bleak?

Nay, for there is pungent incense
Litany and impressionable speech
Forgiveness comes in silver songs
Is that not gray, is that not light as well?

So this is but a parliament of perception
Woven to be won in all affection
Though gray is not entrapment, it is sound
And love is not a mystery, once found

Copyright Kkh 12/08/05

© Copyright 2005 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-12-08 09:28 PM


Gray can say so much....though it often is
associated plainly with drab, dull, somber,
the color of a tombstone...the ashen gray of
a face...so much more...   IF only I could
sculp the words you do....

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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USA
2 posted 2005-12-09 04:04 AM


Kathleen, I cheer you for your wonderful perspective; this is inspirational!   ....jo
Goldenrose
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3 posted 2005-12-09 05:45 AM


Kathleen,i enjoyed this and the words, i like to learn new words...thank you..

Goldenrose.

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
4 posted 2005-12-09 07:19 AM


A name between the lines of infamy
Scene in defiance and charm
The artist’s eye of double exposure
Am I monotone in heartbeat bleak?
love it and  the ending~~


M

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis
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the ass-end of space
5 posted 2005-12-09 01:42 PM


'Though gray is not entrapment, it is sound
And love is not a mystery, once found'

fantastic, all. but those last lines just drive it all home

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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Ohio
6 posted 2005-12-09 01:57 PM


So this is but a parliament of perception
Woven to be won in all affection
Though gray is not entrapment, it is sound
And love is not a mystery, once found
*******************************************
the white, can blind
and the black, is stark,
the truth lays between,
a sigh of softness
the moss that forms
along the edges
of the hardened stone,
the unexpected beyond
the obvious

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

7 posted 2005-12-09 02:01 PM


Kathleen, please know you are very much in my thoughts this holiday season.

I wish I knew how to make it all better.

sighing


Startime55
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since 2003-04-05
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Alberta, Canada
8 posted 2005-12-09 02:20 PM


Powerful and deeply moving...Your words go deep into the soul....Stunning....**BIG HUGS**
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