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Open Poetry #36

You were of beauty feline

Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

0 posted 2005-07-17 12:07 PM

You were of beauty within
Feline

You were of beauty without
A desire to control

You were of a mind
That fought who should decide minds

You were hurt
And something beckoned

You arrived
In a distance

You walked and changed
As you walked and changed

As is your right

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2005-07-18 01:40 AM

"You were hurt
And something beckoned

You arrived
In a distance"

I have no idea what you mean or what you are talking about, but I like these lines

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2005-07-18 05:26 AM

I like it

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