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luminosity
Senior Member

since 2005-11-18

Posts 813

0 posted 2005-12-07 10:41 AM

The bars of believe

I believe that

if today is not easy then
tomorrow will be, if not better,
at the very least, brand new;

I believe that

change is good and necessary
that God is working on me and
through me and ten years from now
will find me not just older, but better,
increased in Grace and goodness;

I believe that

either in this life or the next
you will see me
through the forgiving eyes of God
and I will be beautiful;

I believe

in a virgin born Son
that gave His life
for a Father’s love;

I believe that

happily ever after is real,
as I write it is being prepared
for those that believe and someday
I will go there;

Through the bars of believe

a willing prisoner of hope
can see the way to eternity.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

1 posted 2005-12-07 11:07 AM

Okay, so maybe I don't believe exactly as you..but this was really nice and I enjoyed it.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2005-12-07 11:13 AM

We can always believe in the beauty
of another's belief...

and that you have shared this
with us...

really shows us how you shine through
everything.

warm

.

Danie Franklin
Member

since 2005-12-05

Posts 68

3 posted 2005-12-07 11:30 AM

You know that just screams to be printed and put up on my wall to give my son inspiration for him to make it through all his days. Its really a wonderfully worded and told poem. great job.

Danie

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2005-12-07 12:40 PM

Your username suits you! ~ and I believe that your way to Eternity is paved with Light!

A lovely and luminous piece of writing!

EA

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2005-12-07 01:31 PM

This is wonderful...
and I believe too..

I believe
in the sun
even when it's not shining.

I believe
in love even
when not feeling it.

I believe in God
...even when He is silent

Smiles & Hugs, Nancy

~Let peace begin with me...

luminosity
Senior Member

since 2005-11-18

Posts 813

6 posted 2005-12-07 01:48 PM

*big smile*
oh I am so glad I was given this to write, it lifts my heart as it lifts yours....thank you all so much

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

7 posted 2005-12-15 08:22 AM

I've watched you grow in grace and goodness... so I know your beliefs are more than words... they're actions. *S* Here's to brand new tomorrows... with hopes of better. *S* Excellent write!

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2005-12-15 08:59 AM

Luminosity~

This is such a beautiful penning~

'I believe that
change is good and necessary
that God is working on me and
through me and ten years from now
will find me not just older, but better,
increased in Grace and goodness'

What lovely thoughts to share ... thank you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - noles1@totcon.com

luminosity
Senior Member

since 2005-11-18

Posts 813

9 posted 2005-12-16 02:17 PM

suthern, thank you so much...it is partly because of your faith in me that the goodness has had a chance to grow

marge, thank you

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