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Tim
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0 posted 2005-11-27 12:17 PM


High in mountains never scaled,
Blow the winds by the gods exhaled
Alpine peaks in ice enshrined,
Beyond the thoughts of mortal mind.
Oh how I wish I could traverse
To icy realm where gods converse,
Beyond the petty talk of man
To the heights where life began
But alas, my feet are planted,
Other than on peaks enchanted.


© Copyright 2005 Tim - All Rights Reserved
Huan Yi
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1 posted 2005-11-27 05:30 AM



where the 3 roads meet
I was surprised to see the great bronze of Hermes

knocked over, flat on the ground:
people use to worship here . . .

now the invincible guardian
lay flat on the ground

but later that night he appeared by my bed
grinned down at me, said:

“ you have to go with the times . . .
that much I learned
when I was a god”



Palladas
(360—430)


iliana
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2 posted 2005-11-27 05:35 AM


Tim, this is excellent writing and I feel where you are coming from....right there with you!
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3 posted 2005-11-27 12:30 PM


tim thanks for the journey , great work man,
~wolf

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4 posted 2005-11-27 12:35 PM


Well take yourself and sit down there.
Mind travel to the top if you dare?

You can enjoy the peace of God
Once your fanny's on that sod!

Enjoyed this one Tim.

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