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SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2005-11-17 07:31 PM



Free

The pain I once felt
Has long since left my heart now
Freeing me of you

2005

© Copyright 2005 Sue Graves - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-11-17 07:46 PM


Sue, a strong senryu! ~ In content and form!


Linda

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just out of reach
2 posted 2005-11-17 07:46 PM


Awesome Sue! Big hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Suetang
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3 posted 2005-11-17 08:17 PM


Sue

I felt so much strength and determination through your words.  

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Alwye
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In the space between moments
4 posted 2005-11-17 08:18 PM


Very strong words you've penned.  I enjoyed the read!

~*Krista Lee Knutson*~

"Creating yourself is a spiritual act." ~ Susan Vreeland, The Forest Lover

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5 posted 2005-11-18 06:44 PM




(big angel hugs) Yay! Oh Sue, it is sooooooo great to see that self-confidence and spirit singing in you as always, dearest friend, you are deserving of the greatest things and I know with all my heart you will find it all, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2005-11-19 03:37 AM


Nice writing...James
Sunshine
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7 posted 2005-11-19 07:36 AM



Very good, Sue!!!

Susan Caldwell
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8 posted 2005-11-19 09:27 AM


and that is a wonderful thing!  Some are just not worth the time and pain we spend on them and oh how I wish those kind of people had to wear a sign on their forehead...wouldn't that be great?  *snicker*

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time
9 posted 2005-11-19 09:29 AM



Freedom
Now felt
How long since left my heart now

Dave

Angelheart
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10 posted 2005-11-19 02:48 PM


this was a very strong write, you expressed how your getting over the person that must of really hurt you, thanks for sharing, keep up the awesome poetry....

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

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11 posted 2005-11-19 03:22 PM


SuzieQ~
You're a free Spirit ... soar~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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