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where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2005-11-14 04:26 PM


I tell you
that I can handle
your honesty,
and your
petty incomplete
smiles.
I do not
desire a dissipating love,
a defensive desire.
I know,
you're not coming home.

Your patterns are so familiar,
like destructive waves among my skin,
and I bleed for you day after day...

..I wish I knew
someone
with hands like yours, only
softer and loving
toward my complex structure..

I understand now..
you will not allow me
to have a name, or a memory,
a death by forgotten virus..I
do not exist.



© Copyright 2005 Meghan Armitage - All Rights Reserved
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2005-11-14 04:47 PM


"..I wish I knew
someone
with hands like yours, only
softer and loving
toward my complex structure.."

~ You deserve nothing less. A woman who is as beautiful on the inside, as on the outside, should be honoured and adored. Speaking of "adored", give adorable Freyja a big hug from me! ~ and keep one for yourself!

EA

pandonov
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b/w conscience and insolence
2 posted 2005-11-15 06:30 AM


sad and beautiful. is sadness always the reason for creating beauty? sure is...  
Courage2Survive
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3 posted 2005-11-15 07:52 AM


Meg,

I loved this piece because it is so incredibly real, well all poetry is real feelings and such but, so many days go by and men do this over and over again. I bet there are a few woman who do it too but then again I don't know everything.

The part about the hands was my favorite part. You deserve nothing but the best, you are a very sweet person. Keep writing.

x0x0- C2S

<3 Heart 2 Heart <3
Kellie Cantrell

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