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MARK V SHELDON
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0 posted 2005-07-14 08:10 AM


TWENTY OR LESS…#212

Copyright 2005 by:  Mark V Sheldon


We awake

seeing

personal changes

for time

never crossed

our minds




You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml

© Copyright 2005 Mark V Sheldon - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2005-07-14 08:22 AM


MARK,
Again right on the Mark.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2005-07-14 08:34 AM


How true, how true..
Well done Mark!

passing shadows
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3 posted 2005-07-15 03:55 AM


I love these of yours!
kaile
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4 posted 2005-07-15 06:47 AM


that's so true--time is like an eel slipping through our elusive fingers

spot-on!

LeeJ
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5 posted 2005-07-15 09:52 AM


We awake

seeing

personal changes

for time

never crossed

our minds


human nature is so unaware beyond it's conditioning, yet, the aptitude is there, but we're sometimes to blinded by seizing the moment?

Love what your words stir

iliana
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6 posted 2005-07-15 01:04 PM


How true.....enjoyed this.
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Gaia
7 posted 2005-07-16 12:05 PM


no, but it sure did double cross mine!
MARK V SHELDON
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8 posted 2005-07-16 04:57 PM


Sy:  ...just shooting from the hip...

Thank you, Nancy.

Dixie, I appreciate your readership...

Kaile:  So it is...  Now, to remember to enjoy the moment while it's there...

LeeJ:  Ah yes...  Conditioning.  How many even "wake up"...?  We do what we can...

Glad it resonated with you, Jo...

Kacy, maybe it had something to do with its "shape"...?

-MVS

You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how:
http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml

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