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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Nudist I am a nudist in the mist Wet within the dews exist And cannot find a towel to dry Or wipe the moisture from my eye My hands explore within the fog My tongue is constant dialogue My ears are full of noise and sound Yet I know naught of what’s around I wonder in the dark of night And whistle in the gray of light I take each step in constant awe And tap a cane the floor before Sometimes I hear the birds at sea Sometimes I feel the wind of thee But always I am bound in mist And painting pictures of exist So if by chance we meet this bog I’ll leave this piece my epilogue |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Good morning, Sy. A fine epilogue, at that... But there is a wardrobe of verses yet to share, despite the wear and tear... -MVS You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I echo Mark here Sy.. You have many more words of wisdom to share. Excellent write m'friend. Hugs~Nancy ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Morning Sy.  Aren't you in Florida? "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sometimes I hear the birds at sea Sometimes I feel the wind of thee But always I am bound in mist And painting pictures of exist ~*~ One has to love that mind of yours, Sy... along with everything else!    |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
My tongue is constant dialogue indeed, and yes, naked, willing and ready, to complete your muse's longings...hey, your birthday suit fits you well... one fine rhyme you've gifted here...thank you Sy |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
My ears are full of noise and sound Yet I know naught of what’s around In a fantastic write, these lines are jewels. Excellent work, my friend! *S* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 awesome! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You write your days of exist very well, and I am sure I will be reading them until eternity, However...  *winkie, winkie* |
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Caraway Junior Member
since 2005-07-14
Posts 24 |
Exposed? naked? weather clothed or not, we all are that way at one time or another. Awesome!!! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Good afternoon, Seymour! I like the way you bare it all! ....jo |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~  For the first time in 5 3/4 years, I'm disappointed in a post of yours~I thought you were going to live up to my expectations ... NUDIST ... with no pics ... whatever must you have been thinking~ Jeez ... and I remember those GORGEOUS legs from New Poet Richey too~ Gosh ... what's a girl gonna have to do ...~ Hmmm ... I know ... we'll just assume that Isobel didn't want you sharing with us~ Uh huh ... that's it, isn't it~ Good girlie, Isobel ~~~  Wub you, Seymour~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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BeWitched Junior Member
since 2005-07-06
Posts 31 |
Every line is just marvelous |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I am a nudist in the mist Wet within the dews exist And cannot find a towel to dry Or wipe the moisture from my eye My hands explore within the fog My tongue is constant dialogue My ears are full of noise and sound Yet I know naught of what’s around I wonder in the dark of night And whistle in the gray of light I take each step in constant awe And tap a cane the floor before Sometimes I hear the birds at sea Sometimes I feel the wind of thee But always I am bound in mist And painting pictures of exist So if by chance we meet this bog I’ll leave this piece my epilogue ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ YOU ROCK YOU ROCK YOU ROCK!!!!!!!!!!!! you are sooooo cool.... I LOVE this poem..... just look at all the awesome symbols and personifications...the metaphors and images... you are me king of way cool .... and ya get extra winkies for these lines... And cannot find a towel to dry Or wipe the moisture from my eye My hands explore within the fog My tongue is constant dialogue I take each step in constant awe And tap a cane the floor before  oh yeah... you rock. *ww*   How about me not blaming you for everything |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
JM is right....you rock...and I suspect you roll too!! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I take each step in constant awe And tap a cane the floor before yer so kewl  just came back to put this one in me library. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
gotta love this! hugs, g |
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