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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2005-11-08 05:38 AM



Lend me your hands
to quell the heat
of my brow
with a cool softness,
the gentlest of touch
that reminds me
who I am
and what awaits~~~

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan
1 posted 2005-11-08 05:42 AM



your hands
to quell the heat
of my brow

with a cool softness,
the gentlest of touch

reminds me
who I am
and what awaits~~~

......................

good . . .

John

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
2 posted 2005-11-08 05:44 AM


thank you...it's this flu thing...

waiting for it to end
M

Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan
3 posted 2005-11-08 05:49 AM



There is a tale
Of a Jewish king
Who gave a treasure
For a simple ring

On which it said
As he daily read

This too shall pass



nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
4 posted 2005-11-08 05:51 AM


Yes~~ I know that tale...

and I am at the "tail" end of it

thanks again
M

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
5 posted 2005-11-10 01:35 PM


I have a thing for hands...

Nicely put, as always, M!

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

6 posted 2005-11-10 02:05 PM


even when writing about the flu, you always write with such class!  I know this flu thing all to well, here's hoping we both feel better soon.  Hugs.
iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
7 posted 2005-11-10 02:35 PM


Even when you have the flu, you still emote grace........get better soon, M-lady!   ....jo
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