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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2005-11-06 03:28 PM


(Here's a "sensitive-sexy" new love song I've written which I think many can relate to! This is just exactly how I feel right now, as I long to simply just meet a girl and get to be her best friend and love her for everything she is! Just that sort of love song that can make any teenage/young lover get all emotional hearing! )

Sounds Better When I Hear It From You
By: Noah Eaton
11/6/05
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It feels like a senior prom,
and they didn’t invite me,
my courage is a spiked punch bowl,
the feeling’s sinking in fast,
I can’t recite to you what I’ve preached in my dreams,
so baby,

Blot your lipstick with your number on a white napkin,
reading lips has always been my first language,
and it sounds better when I hear it from you,
sounds better when I hear it from you...

It’s such a funny feeling,
being the age my mom was when she gave birth to me,
makes you feel like such a late bloomer.
I confess I’m underprepared,
only because I’m afraid you’ll misunderstand me,
so baby,

Blot your lipstick with your number on a white napkin,
reading lips has always been my first language,
and it sounds better when I hear it from you,
sounds better when I hear it from you...
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I know it’s unhealthy to let it all muzzle,
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the winter cries for us to nuzzle,
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ask me out in the form of a personal crossword puzzle,
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cause it sounds better when I hear it from you...
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Wonder how you’d rise and shine,
without your intuiton flirting like crazy,
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stilettos always sweet talk,
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it would be a crime,
to deny the seduction of sheeps eyes,
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I’ll always be direct for you, baby...
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just,
blot your lipstick with your number on a white napkin,
reading lips has always been my first language,
and it sounds better when I hear it from you,
sounds better when I hear it from you,
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sounds better when I hear it from you...
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sounds better when I hear it from you...
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ooohhhh, it sounds better when I hear it from you...
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(it would be a crime,
to deny the seduction of sheeps eyes...)
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mmmmmm, it sounds better when I hear it from you...
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(blot your lipstick with your number on a white napkin,
reading lips has always been my first language...)
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mmm, it sounds better when I hear it from you...


"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

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1 posted 2005-11-06 04:59 PM


"Blot your lipstick with your number on a white napkin,
reading lips has always been my first language,
and it sounds better when I hear it from you,"

This makes a great song Noah!
I would love to hear you singing it.

One day sweetie...a gal is going to come along
and you won't know what hit ya!
She's just gonna sweep you off your feet!
You just wait...your time is coming!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again...and again...

sandgrain
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2 posted 2005-11-06 06:17 PM


Noah, you're just bubbling with talents!  I love it! Thanks for sharing this.
Can't imagine you'd have any trouble attracting a multitude of potentials dates. However, it'll take a lot of sorting and testing before finding one nearly as upbeat, grateful, ambitious, and encouraging as you are to spend your life with.

God bless you,
   Rae

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3 posted 2005-11-06 07:44 PM



You could sing your way into any young woman's heart!

Not only did I enjoy your song of love, but I enjoyed the responses it received from the Enchanting One and Nature's grain of sand!

Loveya!
Linda

Suetang
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4 posted 2005-11-06 08:54 PM


Hey Noah

Remember me?  It's nice to read your words again and I hope all is well in your life.

Take care.........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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5 posted 2005-11-06 11:28 PM


Wow, when that certain young lady comes into your life, you will have lots of lovely songs to serenade her with. This is great Noah! hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2005-11-08 11:32 PM


Nice Noah...start asking some young ladys...James
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