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inkedgoddess
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0 posted 2005-11-04 10:21 AM



Let the children of autumn
cradle you,
as they pass
through your journey,

leaves on the skyride,
laying prayers
on the riverbank,

bringing shrines of golden crimson,

as you fade
the veil of morning.

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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2005-11-04 11:38 AM


"leaves on the skyride,"

~ Aha! There she be! There is always at least one line in your poems that I wish to remember forever!

Autumnal hugs 'n smiles,
Linda

~ Oh, my! On reading the title again, I have a different take on the poem. Did your cat just pass away? If so, I am sorry to hear that. You have written a lovely poem of eternal peace.

inkedgoddess
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2 posted 2005-11-04 12:03 PM


yes dear e.angel
a newborn that was dropped
on my doorstep
didn't make it through life
as long as i would have liked her to
thank you

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3 posted 2005-11-04 12:53 PM


This... is absolutely beautiful. I'm so sorry for your loss!
bklynboy
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florida
4 posted 2005-11-05 01:37 PM


Sad...I lost 2 16 year olds within days of each other...and it still hurts...
Honeybunch
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5 posted 2005-11-05 02:31 PM


It's always so sad to lose a pet and more especially at a young age but lovely words you have penned here.
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Gaia
6 posted 2005-11-05 05:17 PM


~softly meowing here, Mish~
RIP, little kitty

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just out of reach
7 posted 2005-11-05 05:33 PM


sad yet loving write Michele.
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

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