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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2005-11-02 06:45 PM



Never Ending Love Stoy


That would be the one
in which me and my
sweetheart were together,
and we would hug and kiss
and laugh and sing
and we would love
one another forever.


JamesLee
November01
2005

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Larry C
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1 posted 2005-11-02 07:27 PM


And a kazillion dittos on the house.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

SEA
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with you
2 posted 2005-11-02 07:52 PM


very sweet James
Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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3 posted 2005-11-02 08:06 PM



There’s a simple sincere spirit in this
reminiscent of something a Japanese
border guard might have written
then after to be found in The Manyoshu

As such I would like to add it
to my file of poems by others
with your permission.


John


JamesMichael
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4 posted 2005-11-03 11:33 PM


Thank you Larry, Sea and Huan Yi for the nice responses...
Yes John...James

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