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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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An opera Wends its way Across the stage Love Honor Courage All tragically settled In a matter of hours The curtain falls As did the dead Slowly with grace And dignity As if then finally in the end Death itself Could compensate For all the lives gone wrong |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
John The drama on stage the slow warble of voice finds death in the final curtain When in reality death is the beginning |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
What Martie said John. and This is excellent! ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
.....when all it does (for this performance), is bring the curtain down because whatever actors are left have run out of script... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
An excellent poem that made me ponder thoughts. Which is a good thing.... Hugs, Ethel |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Another beautiful Huan Yi cameo! - Owl |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Oops! Sorry, forgot to click the library button. - Owl |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
reminds me of war, sort of Good one John |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
"Death itself Could compensate For all the lives gone wrong" very bitter words.though poetic. |
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