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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2005-10-28 06:50 AM



Waking
to the stretching
of another day

Darkness
still surrounds
but light
is turning the corner
whispering
its promises...


M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-10-28 08:02 AM


this compliments that beautiful smile


Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
2 posted 2005-10-28 08:07 AM


interesting style ms MM
fun to imagine
how your gather your images
kewl write

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan
3 posted 2005-10-28 10:47 AM




Waking
to the stretching
of another day

Darkness
but light
is turning the corner

whispering
its promises...

...........................


That's pretty good

John

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