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Jason Lyle
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With my darkling

0 posted 2005-10-26 08:33 PM


I love her blue eyes
not for what they seem to be
but for what they see

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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2005-10-26 08:50 PM


Very good Jason...much enjoyed!
Hugs~Nancy

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
   So you won't ever forget me.~

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Gaia
2 posted 2005-10-26 10:02 PM



INclan
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3 posted 2005-10-27 11:55 AM


Nicely crafted!
INclan

Pilgrimage
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4 posted 2005-10-27 12:25 PM


Oh yeah.  This one made me smile--such a different point of view.  Well done.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
5 posted 2005-10-27 12:39 PM


Jason~
This is absolutely  W O N D E R F U L  !
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - noles1@totcon.com

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