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Angelheart
Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

0 posted 2005-10-25 12:41 PM


I had a nightmare
It was about another
scenery of life
I was not even with
my boyfriend Casey

It was my birthday
I ran away from my house
went to a shady spot

Started crying my eyes out
near the shady spot
A girl came up to me
saying everything
will be alright

I woke up
tears dropping
from my eyes
I turned on my light

I looked in the mirror
my nose was as red
as my cheeks

This was around 4 o'clock
in the morning
I got me a drink of diet coke

I woke my mom up
I told her
I had a nightmare
she told me
to go back to bed

I started to go
back to sleep
I had another bad dream
I dreamed that a bunch of cats
bit me
hurt me

At 6:15a.m. I woke up again
had to get ready for school
this has been blanking my mind
all day
wondering why
I'd dream something like this

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

© Copyright 2005 Laura - All Rights Reserved
sweetpoetess
Member
since 2005-02-27
Posts 428
Florida
1 posted 2005-10-25 01:58 PM


That is a true definition of a nightmare. Keep up the awesome poetry!!!

Poetry is beauty in words.
    

Sharksbean
Member
since 2005-09-25
Posts 368
jax
2 posted 2005-10-25 04:07 PM


this has me worried about you but the poem was good

-may the force be with you in poetry

xFromtheHeartx
Member
since 2005-09-24
Posts 80
Florida U.S.
3 posted 2005-10-25 04:25 PM


im sorry to hear baby . i hope that never happens hon....


INclan
Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024
Indiana, USA
4 posted 2005-10-28 04:46 PM


Silent it came all evil and black,
No way this dream from heaven sent.
It stole my sleep not giving it back,
Till at the dawn it went.

Angelheart, I believe this is the first of you I have responded to.  I shall look for more from you in the future....

INclan

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