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Open Poetry #36

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Don_Juan
Member

since 2004-04-08

Posts 252
Far from where I am going

0 posted 2005-10-24 12:53 PM

I've reread your signature as the sun slipped to oblivion beyond the horizons grasp.
Those intoxications darting through dazed clouds caused trees to escape from root shackles.
It was all i wanted
Yet the pen formed transcibings became foreign to my idiot mind.
My tongue arrid and unable to tell yet my premature eyes always conveyed.
A brick of ideas tripped my willing stride
Now, I, lost and battered to the ground, question:
"What chains are these that shackle my limbs to the void of nothingness that I have created?"
Your words slipped past my dormant inkwell shattering all hinderance.
Instinct has always been kin
now it is savior.

nice use of muffin

aujussy wolf

Senior Member

since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

1 posted 2005-10-24 01:13 AM

Your words slipped past my dormant inkwell shattering all hinderance.
Instinct has always been kin
now it is savior.

I liked the end very much
right on djuan

pierce the valley

~wolf

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2005-10-24 01:45 AM

"Instinct has always been kin
now it is savior."

Really liked this.

Don_Juan
Member

since 2004-04-08

Posts 252
Far from where I am going

3 posted 2005-10-26 08:18 PM

Thanks you both for coming by and taking a look at my rust. I appreciate it.

nice use of muffin

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