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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan 
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I time the leaves falling to the ground the orange and crimson float beside the yellow and green magic from the past , watch it unfold before you go when the winds whisked us away to elsewhere the lost feelings settle in at night what card is next in my hand a guess will bloom into truth something in the stars leads to sleep resting in a frozen world that will never thaw JDWIII 10-23-05 |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very nicely written piece leaving me with a lonely ache in my heart. hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
~feeling the movement of the seasons in this~ ~babygirL **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I have to admit James..the title caught my eye.  An excellent write with great imagery. Hugs~Nancy ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Great write. Left me longing for something...eternity, perhaps. CG |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
..."when the winds whisked us away to elsewhere the lost feelings settle in at night" ~ I especially felt those lines. "what card is next in my hand" ~ Perhaps this will help you!  Beautifully written, Dear Wolf,  EA |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
nightshade , the lone wolf knows that heart ache too : ) .....nice to know there are other softys out there lol thanks shade babygirl , yes the seasons always move me too , there is just something cool about the whole ordeal ...thanks for the reply ,hugs Enchantress ....got ya with the title glad you read it though : ) hugs too castle g ... eternity fits right in there thanks for the good words ...peace earth angel how sweet of you .. i like those parts of the poem best too, thanks angel : ) howlll ~wolfman |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
I really enjoyed this, the imagery did lots. Good work. Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial) |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
happy you enjoyed this one it was a few thoughts about this time of year images are kinda my style thanks voiceless ~wolf |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
magical.............. |
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