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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2005-10-22 05:52 AM


Listening to your voice
echoing through my core,
scenes rising to my
deepest dreaming brumal sleep.
No stranger are you,
but welcome within my
safest, heart care sanctuary.
Like a half hidden
house, shaded by trees,
sun slung low, atop
uppermost branches, opaque streams,
spun gold, gossamer fantasy,
waving filaments of fire
to your standing form.
Enter, wipe away life's
sweat worries from brow,
glistening neck, fevered lips,
heaving flesh valley, chilled
quivering belly, screaming within.

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

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Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2005-10-22 08:28 AM


Wow! That is some voice! lol


Linda

Angelheart
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2 posted 2005-10-22 12:01 PM


Yeah, what a voice and a delight, thanks for sharing.

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

Constance
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since 2001-07-28
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3 posted 2005-10-22 03:50 PM


My goodness, I believe I've encountered another old soul----my favorite kind of person, and a darn good poet too.

Smiles,
Constance

MGROVES
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4 posted 2005-10-23 10:08 AM


yes, really nice, from the soul

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
5 posted 2005-10-23 11:33 PM


Feels so good to be an inspiration to your heart and to read it through your words!...my voice is still with you, whispering upon the winds...

This was sooooo beautiful....touching! my favorite as of late!

~ARH

"Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away."

aujussy wolf
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6 posted 2005-10-24 12:24 PM


now that poem gets a HOWLLLLLL
super write golden

~wolfman

iliana
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7 posted 2005-10-24 01:40 AM


Beautiful.  
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