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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2005-10-19 10:08 AM

Layered

I can feel my body hum
in the stillness of regret.
I've grieved for others more than once.
(My spirit aways let.)
In forward motion thoughts I bathe,
cabined within dreams.

But where am I? Alone today...
sewing up my seems.

Forgetting how to play, like once
before when heart was warmed.
Stinging hurts that welt in rise,
those be's of cause that swarmed,
to itch my craves on empty days.
No turning back, this tale.

I can feel my body hum
in the stillness of this jail.

Concealed are wishes, deep within
not answered nor deserved.
Life, this game of lonely haunt
that throws its future curved.
And I, not good at catching it
for aching leaves me tiered...

In thoughts of all my yesterdays
when tomorrow wasn't feared.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2005-10-19 10:18 AM

M, a layered and talented poetess ye be!

I never leave a poem of yours without something tucked into the recesses of my mind!

Today, it is this line "sewing up my seems."
Loved the play on words! "Seems" ~ perfect!

Linda

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2005-10-19 10:54 AM

Thank you Linda...I will probably do a bit of "sewing" for a friend this evening, so it is on my mind...among other things

M

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

3 posted 2005-10-19 10:58 AM

Sad , yet your heart still pens so beautifully

Hope

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2005-10-19 10:58 AM

MzWynter'sBliss~

This is multi-layered with the thoughts of your making~

'But where am I? Alone today...
sewing up my seems.'

Like sweet EarthyOne ... I applaud this~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - noles1@totcon.com

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