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Toerag
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Ala bam a

0 posted 2005-10-18 04:41 PM



Her breasts now round and sumptuous
A figure that's adorned,
She's worked on this contiuously,
Before was only scorned.

Hair like golden strands of silk,
A complexion like baby's
Legs like that on "J-Lo"
One very gorgeous lady.

She's worked and saved and done without,
To get her body in this shape,
Now she's pursued by all the men,
Her looks are simply great.

Though it took so many years,
She's never been regretful,
Congratulations Magnus
Your surgery was successful.

© Copyright 2005 Toerag - All Rights Reserved
Nightshade
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just out of reach
1 posted 2005-10-18 04:48 PM



Larry C
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2 posted 2005-10-18 04:56 PM


Toe,
You must be deep into winter. That was cold!

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2005-10-18 05:24 PM


Never a dull moment with you on the scene Toe!!

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2005-10-18 05:32 PM


Toerag
I think Balladeer will be jealous.

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2005-10-18 05:33 PM


Well, I suppose that cowboy hat of s/his is now a cowgirl hat!

It is so good to see you back in the saddle again, so to speak! You certainly bring the hee-haw out in your readers!

Tell Barry/Mary that I won't hold it against him that his bustline is bigger than mine!

Lovin' hugs 'n laughs,
Linda


Larry C
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6 posted 2005-10-18 05:48 PM


Linda!

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

ThisDiamond
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7 posted 2005-10-18 06:06 PM


SMILE!!!


WIHWT
TD

Marge Tindal
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8 posted 2005-10-18 07:32 PM


ToeMan~
LOL ... now I can see our handsome Magnus, getting some really permanent ink with which to poetically tattoo your humorous hide !!

The fun is about to begin~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - noles1@totcon.com

Magnus
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9 posted 2005-10-18 08:10 PM


Oh,  so now the secret is out?  Or so one
might think....when in reality,  it was
HIS stuff that was borrowed and worn....

Imagine Toe all decked out....

Friends...sheesh,  you can't get rid of me
that easily....

suthern
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10 posted 2005-10-19 04:19 PM


I'm glad I read all the way through this... otherwise, I'd be out looking for Magnus and his heavenly body! LOL

Thanks for the grins, Toe... I appreciate 'em! *S*

RennieandBoo
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11 posted 2005-10-20 01:44 PM


I just figured out whats going on here now.... LOL off to the races we go!
nakdthoughts
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12 posted 2005-10-20 01:57 PM


~~gave me a few smiles today ~~

M

Sunshine
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13 posted 2005-10-20 04:26 PM



Oh, the boys are back in town...

Balladeer
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14 posted 2005-10-20 09:11 PM


Get him, Toe! I can't believe the way he lambasted you. Don't stand for that!!! (you've never stood for anything before)


Let him have it!!!!

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