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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2005-10-17 07:00 PM

This Week On End

I allowed the touch to penetrate the hurt,
dissolving the weight of worry
that seems to be continuous,
when the aloneness clings to my skin.

I allowed the strays to confine me
to their surroundings, the truth kept hidden
behind the smiles.

My weakness, words that rise from lips
kneading each challenge, forcing a glow
of familiarity between thoughts behind the eyes,
so sincere that even jesting...
becomes me.

I let go of the all of me, just to be,
to cradle myself in the knowledge
that I am a blink away from happiness
and that even the worst day is a good one
when I breathe life into it.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

1 posted 2005-10-17 08:36 PM

and that even the worst day is a good one
when I breathe life into it

Amen to these wise words Maureen !!

Enjoyed this write. hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2005-10-17 10:43 PM

"and that even the worst day is a good one
when I breathe life into it."

~ Hold that thought! That's the stuff that happiness is made from!

Lovin' hugs,
Linda

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

3 posted 2005-10-17 11:21 PM

that breathe of life
from you to the world
many days is the only
sign for some of us

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

4 posted 2005-10-18 02:48 AM

I allowed the strays to confine me
to their surroundings, the truth kept hidden
behind the smiles.

A sweet read nakdthoughts...

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2005-10-18 05:51 PM

Nice thoughts...James

peppermint35
Senior Member

since 2000-05-28

Posts 1106
Texas, USA

6 posted 2005-10-19 03:32 AM

Hold that thought close to your heart, I know I am.

Wonderful!!!

Pepper
"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

7 posted 2005-10-19 04:13 AM

"I let go of the all of me, just to be,
to cradle myself in the knowledge
that I am a blink away from happiness
and that even the worst day is a good one
when I breathe life into it."

So many lines, I adored, but I am especially happy to hear the ones above! It sounds very optimistic!

....jo

StevenS
Senior Member

since 2005-09-21

Posts 945
L. A. (Lower Alabama)

8 posted 2005-10-19 08:29 PM

Great and beautiful write.

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