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wordwizard
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0 posted 2005-10-17 03:23 PM


Air inflates
blow-up doll expands
strange encounters
served a purpose
real model missed a package

She sat perfectly
dragged from slit package
inflated, expressionless
as he ate breakfast
love making with a crease

passions sagged
he got depressed
she deflated on pressure
limped in his arms
strange encounters terminated
served a purpose
when full.





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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2005-10-17 03:25 PM


lol Does your doll have a name?!?
Doll


ecrivan
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2 posted 2005-10-18 09:10 AM


she served a creative purpose


LeeJ
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3 posted 2005-10-18 09:19 AM


it amazes me, how two people share the most precious gift in life...the most sacred and intimate...then, to come to this...Oh my oh my....
wordwizard
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4 posted 2005-10-18 06:54 PM


It amazes me too and since it's a theme in an upcoming film I'll be producing, I was inspired...


ecrivan
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5 posted 2005-10-21 09:18 AM


Hey guys it's halloween..this one floats up when inflated..hehe


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