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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2005-07-12 07:23 AM


I flew

I sailed across my oceans strife
On the guiding sails of my wife
Driving through the storms and hail
Within the belly of this whale

We met within a gardens Eden
Some where near the country Sweden
And touched upon the glories of
The fruits of heaven up above

When one day the light turned night
And I was cold and full of fright
Cast upon an ugly see
To learn myself to live and be

I learned to rub the sticks of fire
Rubbing them to hearts desire
Casting light upon the wend
To catch the sight of futures end

And in this Babylon of awe
To reach again my Eden’s core


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LeeJ
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1 posted 2005-07-12 08:08 AM


and reach it you have, together...quit an accomplishment, and what life is all about...you do sail gently and most assuridly...wonderful write...happy penning quite admirably...

Hugs to you and she...

Sunshine
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2 posted 2005-07-12 08:51 AM



Giving credit where it's due...
she might owe some sail to you!






nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2005-07-12 09:17 AM


smiling, because  between the lines I read  tenderness~~~

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4 posted 2005-07-12 05:46 PM


Good afternoon Sir Sy,  thanx again for
the treat of your life and wife.

iliana
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5 posted 2005-07-13 11:33 PM


What a totally sweet tribute, Sy!   ...jo
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6 posted 2005-07-14 06:39 AM


boy i really needed a dose of you today. thanks for the smile and the feeling of peace. thankyou sir

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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