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Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time

0 posted 2005-10-16 12:36 PM


Distant like crystal
We checked the surface of the table
Eyes everywhere plastic between us
As a 'Hollywood Movie'
We re-ran the Minatour's palace
In images of grease
And a table that will survive

We’ll we in the railway track bordering on nothing
Awaiting a switch to turn

A neon me


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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2005-10-16 01:27 PM


Excellent write Dave!
Very much enjoyed the read.
Hugs~Nancy

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
   So you won't ever forget me.~

Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time
2 posted 2005-10-16 03:32 PM


Thanks my love

I should have been on the road hours ago.

Just done the hotel late call

Take care

Dave

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california
3 posted 2005-10-16 08:43 PM


nice

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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