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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2005-10-14 07:18 PM



Upon A Heartbreak Sky


Sometimes its good,
as good as good can be,
love is in the air, with
feelings progressing beautifully.
Then for some reason, or perhaps
a hundred reasons why, everything
falls apart, as storm clouds
gather, upon a heartbreak sky.


JamesLee
October13
2005
This is not
a current event.
My honey just arrived
back from Chicago...

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just out of reach
1 posted 2005-10-14 10:12 PM


This really hits home...probably for many of us. So glad that it isn't a "current event." hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2005-10-15 08:53 AM


JamesMichael~
A saddened thought for those caught under that 'heartbreak sky~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - noles1@totcon.com

marcel
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3 posted 2005-10-16 01:51 AM


yes.....i have seen those skies change within a blink........
Larry C
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4 posted 2005-10-18 09:01 PM


Yuppir, it happens. But survive it and the sun shines brighter.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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5 posted 2005-10-23 10:56 PM


always love to read what a romantic writes

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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