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Lost Dreamer
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Somewhere near the Rainbow

0 posted 2005-10-14 05:59 PM


String

I am a field of dreams Narrator,
director of an unoccupied
dress rehearsal of life
after life
before death do us part
of a folded linen tablecloth
not fit for table manners
yet baptized with an array of stains
only purity of life could deliver ala carte.
Qualifications honored
on first come first serve basis
are under scrutiny as ships sail in
and out of harbor awaiting dreams
scattered amongst seaweed role models.
To be or not be traded
as a commodity
in this ever growing stage
preformed on and choreographed
in synchronicity of desired philosophies
rung out and left to dry naturally
as one voice permeates another
in a string of conversation
only few will remember,
and even less will live by.



Sometimes we have to follow a stronger voice, even if it's silent.


[This message has been edited by Lost Dreamer (10-14-2005 08:00 PM).]

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Denise
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1 posted 2005-10-16 09:23 PM


Gloria! So nice to see you again! And so nice to read you again! Very thought provoking piece.
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