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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2005-10-13 08:28 PM




Reflections of
the yesterdays
reside inside
tomorrows
of me~

Mirror
Mirror
please be kind
for there is
so much
more to see~

Far beyond
the lines of frown
that often turn
me upside down
Please reflect
the willing smile
that plays the corners
of these contented lips
gifting me with youthful grace
for just a little while~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - noles1@totcon.com

© Copyright 2005 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
1 posted 2005-10-13 08:38 PM


Marge, this is beautiful. Still, it sounds a little sad/ I hope you aren't unhappy.
Larry C
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2 posted 2005-10-13 08:41 PM


Marge,
I think your wish has already been granted. Lovely write.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Marge Tindal
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SweetSuzieQsie~
Happy as a little piglet in a mud pudlet~

Love you~
*Huglets*

Aw, Larry ... that's sooooooo sweet~
thankee~
~*Me



~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email -   noles1@totcon.com   

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4 posted 2005-10-13 08:53 PM


Ah, beautiful this..
beautiful you!!

Hugs~Nancy

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile.~

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5 posted 2005-10-13 09:45 PM


Dear Marge:  I can't picture you frowning!!
Loved this poem.

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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just out of reach
6 posted 2005-10-13 10:09 PM


Ah Marge, the mirror shall forever be kind to you. Lovely write. hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

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7 posted 2005-10-13 10:38 PM


I like to think of mirrors in so many ways and the way you described it was cool, thanks for giving your point of view shall I say

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

StevenS
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8 posted 2005-10-13 10:46 PM


Marge you will always sparkle and shine and your mirror no doubt will always be kind.:-)
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9 posted 2005-10-14 12:16 PM


Oh Madame Marge...I don't even know where to begin!  That was so touching!  Lovely write!

Yv~Seeing eternal Sunshine
Still shrouded in blinding Darkness

Martie
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10 posted 2005-10-14 12:26 PM


Marge/sis....Can I please borrow your mirror?  
Isobel
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11 posted 2005-10-14 04:27 AM


Dear Marge

I will 'reflect' on this poem of yours!  Eh! Eh!

I enjoyed this verse!

Love Isobel xo


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12 posted 2005-10-14 09:11 AM


ain't that the truth lovely lady, how happiness and peace makes the entire body healthy, youthful regardless of the outside, inside we're so pleased and content.

I loved this!

Betty
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13 posted 2005-10-14 10:02 AM


This is beautiful Marge. Frown ?? Not you!  You are only as old as you feel they say. I know you are 39 .. no older.
Love ya,
Betty

Marge Tindal
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14 posted 2005-10-14 12:34 PM


SweetFriends~

This face knows a frown or two
but, one thing is for sure
the smiles far outnumber the frowns
but instead of upside down
I simply try to turn them downside up~

Just a 'birth-of-day' thought that came to that reflection in the mirror~

Betts~
39 ? ... your sense of humor is only exceeded by the *hug* of your friendship~

Thank you ALL~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - noles1@totcon.com

NewEnglandlazurlu
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15 posted 2005-10-14 01:24 PM


Marge honey, now that we're going to be grandparents in May, we pray for this also.

A wonderful write that touched my heart.

hugs and loves, Marti

Living simply and calmly in the mountains!

Rex Allen McCoy
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16 posted 2005-10-14 02:21 PM


And I already thought you had "youthful grace"


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17 posted 2005-10-14 02:33 PM




Mirror
Mirror, mirror, on Marge's wall,
~Reflect her grace for one and all.
If ever lines should cross her face,
~Please wipe them out with crease erase!

Wand
So mote it be!

Flirty 2

EO


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18 posted 2005-10-14 05:56 PM


Enjoyed this, Marge...in fact, I think it would make a good morning ritual for me to recite it!   ....jo
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19 posted 2005-10-14 06:15 PM


Marge, absolutely gorgeous!  A 'must-have' to add to an already large collection!

Thanks for submitting this.  A treasure...

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