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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2005-10-13 07:54 AM


I can hear her on the wind
calling me,
come see...
          come see
the white caps crashing
on the shore
as breezes blow
wild and free

I sense her
pulling me
closer...
           come closer

and I could feel her rage
beneath the moon
and over the bay

hauntingly;

begging me to stay
within her reach...
            within her grasp
upon my soul
her spell was cast

I heard her sigh
then I knew
that she knew...

I would be forever held

charmed, in blue.

09-09-05



live for today,
dream of the future,
and learn eternal truths from the past..

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LeeJ
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1 posted 2005-10-13 08:52 AM


well, I'll tell you, this is perfect for this time of year, had me from beginning to end...boy I wish I could write so much in so few words...how great thou art!  Loved this and the greatness of that blue you speak of.

Hugs for a wonderful day

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2005-10-13 08:58 AM


Donna, my dear, not only did I enjoy your poem, I am thrilled to see your shining face beaming back at me! A wonderful photo which makes it appear as though you are right here with me! Care to join me in a cup of tea and some chit chat? Sipping Tea

Hugs with lotsa love,
Linda

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3 posted 2005-10-13 09:01 AM


So beautiful Donna...
I have missed you lately.
Good to read you again.
Hugs~Nancy

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile.~

serenity blaze
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4 posted 2005-10-13 09:01 AM


Methinks we, are the ones who would be charmed in blue.
Gentle Spirit
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5 posted 2005-10-13 09:35 AM


some thoughts that breezed through my mind standing on the channel in Erie while on vacation...


This entire mess, is causing much stress,
and time is limited until we can get moved
but i thank you each soooo much.

Everyone is missed much and in my thoughts.
I hope when life returns to normal again to spend much more time here....sigh...

live for today,
dream of the future,
and learn eternal truths from the past..

Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2005-10-13 10:48 AM


GentleSpirit~
How very gently your words blew over us~
Lovely thoughts~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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Sunshine
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7 posted 2005-10-14 07:41 AM



During a moment
of yesterday's scurry
I stepped outside
to see if clouds were hurried...
but all before me
was an ocean's sky...
charmingly blue...

for you and I.


Dark Angel
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8 posted 2005-10-14 06:49 PM


Bella, she's got a hold on me too...

you write her beautiful.



m xx

~i want for myself your trembling~

ice
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9 posted 2005-10-15 06:31 AM


Donna

Blue is the color of the fifth  Chakra.(throat) The chakra that deals with communication,
with self expression, with how we feel, and what we think.
It is bound tightly to creativity. We feel the pressure of it when we get a "lump" in our throats
just before we express tears...from joy or sadness.

The blue chakras job is to link emotion to thought.
Your poem does this well...when I read it out loud, my blue chakra
allowed your view of the world to be visualized, symbolically
through vibrations that emitted from my voice.

enjoyed

-------------ice
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