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Eternity
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Eternity |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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Stepping gingerly over strewn rocks and debris, she rests for the briefest moment, casts a longing look upon the endless sea. Eternity. Salty air tingles flared nostrils, whips her mane like a fancy dancer, a delicate prancer for all to see. Eternity. Waves of history glisten in a golden memory, back to a time when she ran free, without restraints, constraints of humanity. Eternity. Run free and swiftly, alongside your chosen sea. Kick up the sands of time, then leave them behind. Your graceful freedom’s stride is a magnificent sight to see. Eternity. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
But she doesn't look that old, right?  Another excellent write.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, thanks Larry. The face of freedom is ageless. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
This kind of fine writing is ageless too...enjoyed the pace of this...thank you.. Goldenrose. Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba. |
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Dragon Mistress Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 289Washington, USA. |
Beautiful! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
 Loved it, Kacy! Yes! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Stunning Kacy  M xx ~i want for myself your trembling~ |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
A most enjoyable read even though I would rather not think about "eternity" just at the moment. One lifetime is all I can handle, I think. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
beauty...kacy pure beauty  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Kacy...I would love to see this....and did, thanks to your poem! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Kacy, you kicked up the sands of time in the most delightful manner!  Linda |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Lovely write Kacy. Much enjoyed. hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
Yes she did do it in a good manner and I do like this write, thanks for sharing. Poetry can get you very far |
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Sharksbean Member
since 2005-09-25
Posts 368jax |
Midnitesun this is yet another beautiful keep it up girl |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 Your replies warm my heart. I am delighted you enjoyed this piece. |
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