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Open Poetry #36

horseshoes remodel

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-10-10 10:54 PM

you always gave me money
for my services
when I only wanted your saliva
on my lips for awhile

and perhaps a note sometimes
that said I was more than a toss
but I knew when we started
and I saw your hands moving

what you needed was tools
and someone to use them
that wouldn't tell him
how you really felt about storms

and how you looked in the morning
when the smile was deeper
than just a mouth side width
and your hair was messed on purpose

but you thought you looked happier then
___________

dark

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2005-10-10 11:46 PM

Ah, storms are so fractious...
some people
understand...

some...just know.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

2 posted 2005-10-11 02:21 AM

when I only wanted your saliva
on my lips for awhile

and perhaps a note sometimes
that said I was more than a toss
but I knew when we started
and I saw your hands moving

what you needed was tools
and someone to use them
that wouldn't tell him
how you really felt about storms

Well Darn!

mxx

~i want for myself your trembling~

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2005-10-11 08:15 AM

lady sunshine thank you for the reply and smile

__________

lady maree, so pleased you sipped some of this, thank you

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2005-10-11 07:23 PM

a mile-wide-grin-of-a-write
you just remodeled me, LOL

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