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SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2005-10-09 10:08 PM

I Always Knew
~ By Sue ~

For a relationship to be so good
One must know without a doubt
You can be approached
Without fear of condemnation

If I had only had that pleasure
Then, I would be able to agree
Our relationship today
Never could be any better

I didn’t have that pleasure, though
For I always knew
To approach you with my feelings
Would only cause more harm

Therefore, I kept all I felt
Deep inside of me

10-9-05

Angelheart
Senior Member

since 2005-09-08

Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

1 posted 2005-10-09 10:19 PM

very nice, but you know sometimes it does help to talk, but other times, it might be best, I get your point in this and thanks for sharing.

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

Sharksbean
Member

since 2005-09-25

Posts 368
jax

2 posted 2005-10-09 11:56 PM

wonderful poem a delight to read thanks for sharing

-may the force be with you in poetry

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2005-10-13 02:24 AM

Nice writing...its always hard when only one person tries...James

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2005-10-13 08:18 AM

Sue..I know those feelings..not from years gone by but more recently.

Taking word chances is hard to do when you have been dismissed before ...

love you
M

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2005-10-13 08:39 AM

Sweet Chick, and believe you me, it was HIS loss!

Linda

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2005-10-13 11:49 AM

Hi Sue!
It is so good to see you writing and posting.
AND it's good to get these feelings out right?
~Hugs &v Luv, Nancy~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile.~

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

7 posted 2005-10-13 01:33 PM

sad, very sad, yet, very beautifully written

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

8 posted 2005-10-19 05:31 PM

Thank you all for reading and replying.

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