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Jaime Fradera
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since 2000-11-25
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Where no tyranny is tolerable

0 posted 2005-10-07 03:07 PM




I just came inside from outside
whereI immediately fell
under the influence of the atmosphere
and the gaze of our parent star;
and it gave me the following ideas:
Today's aphorism:
Good lawyers keep bad people out of jail.

And Today's weather forecast:
There will be Karilea, heavy at times,
all through the day.
This will be followed by Midnitesun,
heavy at times,
all through the night.
But the Southern Cross?
He willon't be appearing here,
cuz he is in the Southern Hemisphere!
Now ai'm getting out of here
so I can get more atmosphere ...


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JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
1 posted 2005-10-07 04:28 PM


Good one.  But is there really such a thing as a 'good lawyer’??
Cliché or not to Cliché, that is the question.

Nice write


JL


Sharksbean
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since 2005-09-25
Posts 368
jax
2 posted 2005-10-07 07:34 PM


nice write. very interesting view on things thanks for sharing

-may the force be with you in poetry

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
3 posted 2005-10-07 11:35 PM


atmosphere ...is good for the soul...hurry back!

~ARh

"Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away."

Midnitesun
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Gaia
4 posted 2005-10-08 12:17 PM


LOL, Jaime, you crack me up!
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