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Open Poetry #36

The Lost Worlds (sail with me)

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2005-10-07 01:46 AM

when the days have filled
and pressures have seeped
through many layers of walls
skinning deep

when night air takes sail
winding sleepless thoughts
of impassible tales
dreams have brought

when I, myself find
what's missing in me
such meeting of the minds
hearts shall ease

lost, I will sail through
until finding us

where nothing is to lose ...
you're a must

sail with me

~  ~  ~

A word in hand is worth two in a hush ...  CTOwen/05

[This message has been edited by ctowen (10-07-2005 08:09 AM).]

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-10-07 07:58 AM

you had me at "Sail with Me"
You did mean in a sailboat
on the ocean, right

You bring the sailboat and I'll sail with you anywhere!!!

Seriously, this was beautiful!

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

2 posted 2005-10-07 08:16 AM

Thanks for the reply LJ, and the smile ...

     yes, sailing is what was in mind!

            I added one of my inspirations for the write,
                        hope you like that as well!!

    sorry to say, no sail boat as of yet .... but someday
       it will be fitfully named .... ARK 2,
           will pick you up on my first southern wind.

  CT

A word in hand is worth two in a hush ...  CTOwen/05

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

3 posted 2005-10-07 11:37 PM

reminds me of that Christopher cross song..sailing...enjoyed both pic and poem!

~ARH

"Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away."

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

4 posted 2005-10-08 08:46 AM

Mmm .... Romance is in the air these days it seems.

        thanks for the read and your words.
        may romance fill your sails!!

  CT

A word in hand is worth two in a hush ...  CTOwen/05

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

5 posted 2005-10-08 08:18 PM

when night air takes sail
winding sleepless thoughts
of impassible tales
dreams have brought''''

sometimes even in the darkest seas, the light shines.....

follow your map, it will lead you to the shore/s of happiness...

ME~

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