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ChemicalRepose Member
since 2004-03-28
Posts 102 |
Another solitary moment scares sanity from penetrating this curios existence. The winds are blowing, defying gravity. Taking away, this frightened body. With my silence binding this together my silence is taking over. And my silence is shaking, vibrant with defiance, but I need this silence. I need this silence. Ignore me, I'm too feeble and won't hear you anyway. Can't be bothered on such a glorious day. I must continue to feel this decadence today. Crowding around me the silence has found me simply give in to solitary. Silence me Silence me Silence me Meager sounds vanish were they really there? Slowly vanish Too much for me to bear? I'm alone and that's alright. I'm far from home and don't want to fight. I'll vanish again into these desolates now, parish from existence, and crawl back to benevolence. |
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Sharksbean Member
since 2005-09-25
Posts 368jax |
this is a beautifully dark poem thanks for sharing and heres a hug to brighten up your day  -may the force be with you in poetry |
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ChemicalRepose Member
since 2004-03-28
Posts 102 |
well, thanks, but It'll take much more then a hug to brighten me up!  |
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DennisTheMenace Member
since 2005-09-04
Posts 240 |
Whoa dude, u need 2 ease up on downers, try poppin different colors 4 a while, but seriously, very good dark write. Try letting out primal scream b4 crawling back to Ben. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Powerful dark poem...you need some sunshine to brighten your day and a hug  ~ARH  "Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away." |
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