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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2005-10-04 09:39 AM



Pointing It Out

I erase the feelings triggered
by inactions that offend.
Pierced by arrowed words some days
metered in their send.

If pointing out would undo harm,
if shadows would subside,
the chemistry would spark its will
releasing from its hide.

Writing words behind the ill
are lost in fevers whim.
I font these thoughts in type of plain
in understanding him.
M
*senseless thoughts*

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2005-10-04 09:46 AM


Hi, Maureen! I enjoyed reading your *senseless thoughts*

~ Especially the following lines:

"I font these thoughts in type of plain
in understanding him."

I always marvel at your unique turns of phrase!


Linda
P.S. I hope your teaching school year is going well!



nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2005-10-04 10:07 AM


My turning of the phrase is probably due to living among the Pennsylvania Dutch here for over 30 years now...
thank you... The subbing for now is going well...I asked to not be called for a few days to get my voice back. I have a bit of the kindergartners' cold and laryngitis.


M


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3 posted 2005-10-04 10:11 AM


MzWynterBliss~

'I erase the feelings triggered
by inactions that offend.'


Yes, often 'inaction' hurts worse than 'reaction' to an 'infraction'~
{now THAT's "senseless")

I get the gist of it .. honest I do~

Nice to see you lady~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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Thomas119gold
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4 posted 2005-10-04 10:28 AM


I erase the feelings triggered
by inactions that offend.
Pierced by arrowed words some days
metered in their send.

I am always awed with your words and this sticks out to the point of  wanting to use it with a few co-workers I know.

But I don't think they would grasp the meaning.

Tommy

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state of mind
5 posted 2005-10-04 01:03 PM


enjoyed
bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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just out of reach
6 posted 2005-10-04 01:23 PM


Always enjoy your writings Maureen.
Hope you are well and happy.
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

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