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SarBear
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since 2003-06-05
Posts 205
Massachusetts

0 posted 2005-10-02 09:41 PM


I don't want it to end this way,
I really don't know what to say.
The chances have come and gone,
I've tried so many times to stay strong.
I want you to know I care,
And I really wanted you to be there,
I always wished it was more,
I know now that it can never be.
What I thought was right,
I know is wrong.
Lacking feeling,
Emotional strings lay frayed.
I've wanted you all along,
But I just feel lost in this never ending sea of time,
Where nothing ever goes the way I want it to.
So, my heart lays bleeding,
Once again left for dead
Bruised, torn, and worn,
from your non-existing words
Can't you see?
I didn't want there to be an end...


© Copyright 2005 Sara Connolly - All Rights Reserved
iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
1 posted 2005-10-04 01:48 AM


The words match your title well.  Know the feelings, well.  Hope things get better.  
Sharksbean
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since 2005-09-25
Posts 368
jax
2 posted 2005-10-04 12:56 PM


this is so sad it breaks my heart thank you for sharing
JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2005-10-04 08:10 PM


Nice...James
froggy
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since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893
Michigan
4 posted 2005-10-05 09:35 PM


Enjoyed the read

:-)

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