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Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

0 posted 2005-09-30 12:24 PM

Whispers of grey thread danced in passion that allows belief with a moist wet soil or soul
If you prefer

They dance unseen fragments of mist with often a warm and cold heart

Warm to touch cold to lie in your world that would see you fly and fall
in your belief

Driven by nothing they danced to tunes that envelope our ideas and encompass our desires

If driven too high we freeze driven too low we stumble

Driven by nothing but images we categorise

In warm beds and cold breathing windows where water drips for

A death of our world

Angelheart
Senior Member

since 2005-09-08

Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

1 posted 2005-09-30 01:16 PM

Very Interesting. thanks for sharing.

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

Sharksbean
Member

since 2005-09-25

Posts 368
jax

2 posted 2005-09-30 02:29 PM

i think is very good i dont really understand it but i like it anyway keep up the good work.

-may the force be with you in poetry

RennieandBoo
Junior Member

since 2003-09-02

Posts 47
Florida!

3 posted 2005-09-30 02:31 PM

I love it, you don't see many poems written like this ya know!!

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

4 posted 2005-09-30 02:52 PM

your thoughts are intriguing, even between the grey/s

Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

5 posted 2005-09-30 04:30 PM

Trying to go for

I suppose I call it the fourth leve

I often talk about 1 2 1
Then 2 1
Then 3
Watching 3 2
or possibly 1

in terms of images and people and that some people want to write and maybe write poetry and in your mind you get that ability to just "look at life" as more than immediate

Pleased you liked you

Bodger

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

6 posted 2005-09-30 11:24 PM

After your explanation, I was pleased to see I got your message clearly. Yes...Whispers of Grey.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

7 posted 2005-09-30 11:34 PM

so many shades of grey,
each whispering its own hue and tune

~misty grey mornings~
~grey concrete sidewalks~
~the grey feel of a somber mood~

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